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2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编（3）

之书面表达--读后续写

【**_*2020-2021学年上学期高三摸底考试】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

One year, a newspaper of the United States published an announcement that the horticultural institute offered a reward at a high price for the pure white marigold (金盏花). The high reward attracted so many people, but in nature besides golden, the marigold is brown, and it is not easy to grow the white one. So after they were excited for a time, many people had forgotten the announcement.

Years flew away. One normal day after 20 years, the horticultural institute that had published the announcement accidentally received a letter and 100 seeds of pure white marigold. On that day the news spread like wildfire.

It turned out to be an old woman of over 70 years old. The institute had always been hesitating over the fact that the letter said with certainty that the seeds could bloom pure white marigold, and the need for verification (验证) became the focus of the debate. Whether they would make an experimental verification or not became the controversial focus at one time.

Some said you would never live up to the old man’s wish. Those seeds finally took root in the earth. The miracle appeared after one year: large patches of pure white marigold waved in the breeze.

Accordingly, the old woman who was always unknown to the public became a new focus.

Originally, the old woman was a flower lover. When she occasionally read the announcement in the newspaper 20 years ago, she was eager to try. But her eight children strongly opposed her decision. After all, a woman who never knew the seed genetics (遗传学) couldn’t complete what the experts could never achieve, so her thought seemed very foolish.

注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。

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Still, the old woman didn’t change her mind and went on working without hesitation.

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Finally, after 20 years on the day we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold.

【答案】 Still, the old woman didn’t change her mind and went on working without hesitation. She planted some of the most common seeds and took good care of them. A year later, when the marigold came out, she chose the faintest one from those golden and brow flowers and got the best seed. The next year, she again grew them and chose… Day after day, year after year, through many seasons, the old woman’s husband died, her children flew far, but only the wish to grow the pure white marigold took root in her heart.

Finally, after 20 years on the day we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold, which was not nearly white, but as white as silver or snow. A problem even scientists couldn’t deal with was solved by an old woman who didn’t understand genetics. Was it magic? To take root in the heart, even the most common seed, can grow into a miracle!

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了一位超过70岁的老人种出了纯白色的金盏花的事情。

本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，园艺学会以高价悬赏纯白色的金盏花，但这并不容易。就在人们渐渐忘记这个事情的时候，在20年后的一个普通的日子里，一位70多岁的老人寄给园艺协会一封信和100粒纯白色的金盏花的种子。在人们的质疑声中，一年后，这些种子种出了大片纯白色的金盏花。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：尽管如此，老人还是没有改变主意，毫不犹豫地继续工作。接下来应该描写老人种植纯白色的金盏花的过程，以及在这个过程中遇到的困难，比如丈夫的去世和孩子的离开，但老人并没有放弃。第二段开头是：终于，在20年后我们都知道的那一天，她在花园里看到了一朵纯白色的金盏花。本段应该写老人的坚持获得了成功，她种出了纯白色的金盏花。并阐述这个事情所体现出的道理，只要坚持，即使是普通人，也能创造奇迹。

最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时，词数应为150左右，注意遣词造句，不要出现语法错误和中式英文，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：hesitation, took good care of, deal with, understand, miracle等高级词汇和短语；文章恰当的使用了定语从句，如“Finally, after 20 years on the day we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold, which was not nearly white, but as white as silver or snow.”和“A problem even scientists couldn’t deal with was solved by an old woman who didn’t understand genetics.”，使文章表达更加地道。

【**_*五校联盟2021届高三第一次联考】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

"Pick up the pace!" said Amy's husband. "But I can't!" Amy said, her heart beating quickly inside. "I can't go any faster! Her husband encouraged her. "Yes, you can! You're making progress every day.”

To help Amy stay healthy, her husband had been running with her for over two years. Several years ago, Amy could barely walk down the stairs of her apartment building due to fatness caused by eating disorders. She realized the problem after a failed job interview and began walking to improve her ability to move. At first, she could walk for only 15 minutes at a time. But she pushed herself every day, walking 5 minutes longer than she did the day before until she walked for an hour and eventually two. For three years, Amy kept her walking habit, slowly and painstakingly building her body shape. Then she changed her walking shoes to running shoes about two years ago and became an excellent runner.

In March 2001, an advertisement invited people to nominate（提名）an ordinary person who inspired them to bring the Olympic flame to Salt Lake City as torch bearers（火炬手）or support runners.（Support runners serve as “guardians of the flame" and run with torch bearers along the journey.）Amy's experiences touched her husband, so he nominated her to be a torch bearer. The possibility to be selected was low, but Amy wanted to try.

Running taught Amy the importance of training for a race. She pictured herself running a race and crossing the finish line. For months, she ran through her neighborhood carrying a broken-off broom handle, feeling the weight of the torch. She waved at her neighbors, pretending they were cheering crowds. She also printed a picture of a torch bearer wearing the white uniform, replaced the face with a picture of hers, and put it onto her refrigerator door.

Every day, Amy imagined herself as a torch bearer. She was training for a historic running event. On September 26th, while on her daily run through her neighborhood, an express package arrived.

注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

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Amy opened it and found a letter and a book on the Olympics.

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"One of today's torch bearers can't run her part, " announced the relay organizer.

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【答案】Paragraph 1:

Amy opened it and found a letter and a book on the Olympics. The letter read, "Congratulations! You've been selected as a support runner for the Olympic Torch Relay..." Although she wouldn't be wearing the white uniform, she wasn't disappointed. She completed the required physical examination, delivered the forms, and waited. Months later, another package arrived. It contained her official blue support runner uniform along with instructions for her part of the relay. Then on a cold day, Amy and her husband stood outside the Torch Relay collection point.

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"One of today's torch bearers can't run her part," announced the relay organizer. Then he said, "One lucky support runner will become a torch bearer. Select a person now." Luckily, Amy became the torch bearer. Holding it tight, she ran down the street filled with people waving flags. The Olympic theme song was broadcast. Amy smiled and waved to the crowds, knowing that she was carrying not only the torch, but also the Olympic spirit.

【解析】

本篇书面表达是读后续写。

通过阅读所给文章可知，几年前，艾米由于饮食失调导致肥胖，几乎走不下公寓楼的楼梯。在丈夫的帮助下，慢慢地恢复身材，并成为一名优秀的跑步运动员。在看了一则广告后，丈夫鼓励艾米去竞选奥运火炬手。为此，艾米把自己想象成火炬手，一直为此训练，直到有一天，一个快递包裹到达。

续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：艾米打开它，发现了一封信和一本关于奥运会的书。本段应该写艾米看到信上写着自己被选为奥运火炬接力的助跑员。她完成体检几个月后，又来了一个包裹，里面是正式的蓝色助跑服，还有她那部分接力的说明，终于到了火炬接力的那一天。第二段开头是：“今天的火炬手中有一个不能胜任她的角色，”接力组织者宣布。本段应该写艾米在挥舞着旗帜的人们中，跑去接过火炬，奥运主题曲播出了，艾米微笑着向人群挥手致意，她传递的不仅是火炬，还有奥林匹克精神。

续写时要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：be selected as，run down，fill with等高级词汇；Although she wouldn't be wearing the white uniform, she wasn't disappointed. 让步状语从句的运用；Amy smiled and waved to the crowds, knowing that she was carrying not only the torch, but also the Oly 内容过长，仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览，全文请查看图片预览。 者和妈妈的做法以及邻居的吃惊和感激之情和妈妈一直对这个家庭的不间断的帮助等。第二段开头是：看着我的母亲，我为自己是这个了不起的女人的女儿而感到自豪。本段应该写妈妈虽然以前生活很艰难，但是在富裕之后仍然在坚持帮助他人以及作者对妈妈的无比的骄傲和崇拜之情。

续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。

【点睛】

本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：hand over；put …in place; from time to time; feel proud to; be able to等高级词汇；感叹句What a great example she set for me that day! ; as引导的时间状语从句，As we stepped inside the kitchen, their eyes found the box, and the parents' jaws dropped。

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