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2021届新高考8省3+1+2模式高三名校好题速递分项汇编（3）

之书面表达--应用文写作

【**_*2020-2021学年上学期高三摸底考试】你校学生会将举办一次以中医药（traditional Chinese medicine)为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你用英语写一个书面通知。内容包括：

1.比赛目的；

2.比赛时间及地点：11月4日下午3点，报告厅；

3.报名时间及地点：10月26-30日，学生会办公室。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Notice

Student Union

【答案】Notice

In order to improve students’ spoken English and inspire their interest in learning traditional Chinese medicine, we are going to hold an English speech contest on traditional Chinese medicine in the lecture hall at 3：00 p.m. on November 4, 2020. Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30. Please try your best and be well-prepared. You are supposed to get there on time. All the students are welcome.

Student Union

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一个书面通知，表达学生会将举办一次以中医药为主题的英语演讲比赛的相关情况。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

要求：1.比赛目的；

2.比赛时间及地点：11月4日下午3点，报告厅；

3.报名时间及地点：10月26-30日，学生会办公室。

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

improve students’ spoken English； inspire their interest in ； traditional Chinese medicine； hold an English speech contest； in the lecture hall ； sign up for ； at the office of Student Union; be well-prepared; are supposed to 。

第三步：连词成某某

1. In order to improve students’ spoken English.

2.Inspire their interest in learning traditional Chinese medicine.

3.we are going to hold an English speech contest on traditional Chinese medicine in the lecture hall at 3：00 p.m. on November 4, 2020.

4.If you have an interest in it , you can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30.

5.Please try your best and be well-prepared.

6.You are supposed to get there on time.

7.All the students are welcome.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成某某（衔接词）

通知简短，语言简洁。本文没有使用表文章结构顺序Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…或表并列补充关系Besides, Moreover等衔接词。第一句巧妙使用介词短语in order to 说明通知的目的；第二句使用了Those who … 的定语从句，说明了想参赛的对象。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，通知把比赛目的、比赛时间及地点、报名时间及地点等要点清析表达，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一个主从复合句：Those who have an interest in it can sign up at the office of Student Union from October 26 through October 30。这句话运用了who引导的定语从句。使用了固定词组inspire their interest in ; be supposed to do等。文章思路清晰，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【**_*五校联盟2021届高三第一次联考】最近国家教育部明确指出：将来体育课也必须布置作业，确保学生掌握运动技能。你班同学对此进行了热烈的讨论。你校英文报刊对此向中学生征文，标题是“My Opinion on Assigning Homework for PE". 请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿，要点提示：

1. 对体育课布置作业表示赞成；

2. 陈述布置体育作业的必要性；

3. 你喜欢什么样的体育作业。

注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

参考词汇：国家教育部the Ministry of Education

My Opinion on Assigning Homework for PE

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【答案】My Opinion on Assigning Homework for PE

Recently the Ministry of Education confirmed that homework for PE must be assigned to make sure that students master sports skills. I can't agree more with it.

From my perspective, it is highly necessary to assign homework for PE. For one thing, students have little time to do exercise owing to lots of academic homework, suffering from physical weakness or overweight. For another, most students prefer to play computer games rather than do sports when they are free, which is bad for their physical health.

My favourite homework for PE is rope skipping because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing academic homework.

【解析】

这是一篇应用文，用英语写一篇征文稿。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达赞成

2. 陈述布置体育作业的必要性

1）没有时间锻炼身体。（have no time to do exercise）

2）对身体健康有利。（be good for one’s physical health）

3. 喜欢什么样的体育作业

第二步:列提纲（重点词组）

be assigned to; make sure; master sports skills; From my perspective; it is highly necessary to; suffering from; For another; prefer to; rather than; not only…but also…

第三步：连词成某某

1. Recently the Ministry of Education confirmed that homework for PE must be assigned to make sure that students master sports skills.

2. From my perspective, it is highly necessary to assign homework for PE.

3. For one thing, students have little time to do exercise owing to lots of academic homework, suffering from physical weakness or overweight.

4. For another, most students prefer to play computer games rather than do sports when they are free, which is bad for their physical health.

5. My favourite homework for PE is rope skipping because not only can I do it at home conveniently but also it can help to refresh me after I get tired from doing academic homework.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成某某（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了复合句，如：For another, most students prefer to play computer games rather than do sports when they are free, which is bad for their physical health.这句话运用了when引导的状语从句和which引导的定语从句。文章使用了一些固定词组，如be assigned to; make sure; master sports skills等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【XX省“荆、荆、襄、宜“四地七校联盟2021届高三上学期期中联考】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：

1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）；

2. 推荐旅游景点。

注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；

2.开头和结尾已给出；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Henry,

How is everything going?

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Henry,

How is everything going? Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend doc.001pp.com.

The website offers 3D virtual tours of many amazing sights in China. You can register on the website or download the app. In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you are interested in, just click the mouse. Many popular sights, such as West Lake, Mount Tai and the Palace Museum, won’t fail to feast your eyes.

I wish you would have a wonderful time.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Henry写邮件请你推荐一个可以游览中国风景名胜的虚拟旅游（virtual travel）网站。请你给他回一封邮件，内容包括：1. 介绍所推荐网站（包括网址、网站特点、如何使用等）；2. 推荐旅游景点。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组）：be extremely enthusiastic about (对……充满热情)；virtual travel website(虚拟旅游网站)；highly recommend(强烈推荐)；amazing(令人惊异的)；sights(风景)；register(注册)；download(下载)；in addition(另外)；take photos(拍照)；such as(比如)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如Knowing that you are extremely enthusiastic about traveling around China through a virtual travel website, I highly recommend doc.001pp.com.运用宾语从句；In addition, if you want to take photos in a place you are interested in, just click the mouse.运用条件状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

【**_*2021届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）】你们年级计划举办一场英文演讲比赛，主题为“我最喜爱的运动”。请写一篇参赛演讲稿。

内容包括：

1. 运动项目；

2. 喜爱原因。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。

My Favorite Sport

Hello, everyone.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 内容过长，仅展示头部和尾部部分文字预览，全文请查看图片预览。 ing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：When I asked her questions, she always tried to make me to understand with patience and care．这句话运用了when引导的状语从句;使用了一些固定词组如be patient with; with one’s help; made rapid progress in; struggle with等。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。

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